Authearth

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Prose Ache

This is a placeholder poem.
It is made out of coathangers and twigs
and I rest it here while I
wrestle
with concepts too oily to grasp.
My fingers slither over insubstantial scissures.
I strip down to my navel and engage,
rucking shoulder to shoulder with tropes. I try to
grapple with a dozen spidery sub-plots that
stick tendrils up my nose and mouth and threaten
to put out my eyes.
I bite and sever, the cut is raw. A parry and block
gives me time to
step back and rethink.

I put on my poet's hat, a floppy thing of
red velvet and royal blue feathers
lined with vellum. It's impractical
by necessity.
I draw my sword and with balletic wrist,
describe a whorl in the air.
Unlike alphabetti spaghetti, these words
are tricksy. I can't pinion them with the tines of a fork.
Quickstab.

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Yet again, another great poem by Rhian :) Love the poets hat!

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love all the unusual words and old world feeling. rucking, tropes, vellum... i also think the first 2 sentences read well because of the rhythm and simplicity. i find 'my fingers...' doesn't follow on quite as well. too much ssss. the fencing image at the end is fun!

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