My memories of you are one at a time.
And there aren't that many photos really.
Little evidence of a lifetime spent together.
Only that strange feeling in my chest
that lets me feel proud when you make a room laugh,
assures me that I won't still be angry tomorrow,
made me weep at your voice when we were apart.
No, there's not much to show for it.
But when we both smile
at a thought, thought only by us,
Our friends will say we have the same eyes.
I think this is lovely. Maybe lovely is not a useful word, but i feel like saying it! I think the most promising parts are the first and last lines, both strong and genuine. It reminds me of me and my brother (apart from the weeping bit). You should do some more. Liz