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critiscise me
I wrote this in like 5 minutes last night, i have yet to revise it but instead have decided to realse it in it's raw form and open for critiscism
A man amongst treasures,
Rubies which shine like the stars.
A man within pleasures,
Discarding her bra's.
A man without ration,
Crumbs on the floor.
A man locked in passion,
Begging for more.
A man knows his will,
It is seldom wrong.
A man earns his thrill,
With a silver tongue.
A man with coercion,
Made for the con.
A man's sick perversion,
Will never be gone.
A man with obediance,
hears womens names.
A man's sexual deviance,
Creates twisted games
A man amongst treasures,
Rubies which shine like the stars.
A man within pleasures,
Discarding her bra's.
A man without ration,
Crumbs on the floor.
A man locked in passion,
Begging for more.
A man knows his will,
It is seldom wrong.
A man earns his thrill,
With a silver tongue.
A man with coercion,
Made for the con.
A man's sick perversion,
Will never be gone.
A man with obediance,
hears womens names.
A man's sexual deviance,
Creates twisted games
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Permalink Reply by david barron on -
Sorry my friend this seems to be really deep, and i'm not exactly sure where your taking the reader. People with sexual perversions should really keep them in the bedroom. Lot of younger peeps on here.dave
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