Hi Robyn, you could trace the story through the grandaughter, but you wouldnt want to repeat what you've already covered, that would spoil it I think. Maybe just go on the track that she left in a loft and forgot all about it till she was having a clear out or something like that, and then have her open it at the end, with whatever you have planned for the ending,with a twist. I like stories with a double twist, though sometimes that can a bit complicated. I am working on one at the moment for my writing group that's causing me a lot of headaches.
yes- i was wondering wherther i should continue (perhaps with the tale of their grandaughter when she inherits it?) to further explain it, or do you think it is fine as it is? thanks for the comments :)
Hello sharon- welcome to Authearth! I would be VERY greatfull if you commented on my short story- When we were young? I am 15 so go easy on the commenting! thanks...xoxox
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I loved your Saved by the Elephant - warmed the cockles of my heart (perhaps something to do with being a teacher!)
Best wishes
Thed